Can You Guess?? by Afroditi and Ellie T

I’m a friend,

I’m a ship,

I like to travel,

I like to tease,

I’m friendly,

But sometimes not,

I float from person to person,

My feelings and emotions can change on the spot,

I sometimes fight,

But never drown,

What am I,

Can you guess what I am?

FRIENSHIP

13 thoughts on “Can You Guess?? by Afroditi and Ellie T

  1. Dear Afroditi and Ellie T,
    I agree with Eleonora, is the answer friendship?
    Also, I liked the picture you drew and how you described friendship as

    “I float from person to person,
    My feelings and emotions can change on the spot,
    I sometimes fight,
    But never drown, ”
    From,
    Daphne 🙂

  2. Dear Ellie and Afroditi,
    I think that your poem was amazing! It rhymed and you used vivid language in your poem. I hope you write more of your fun poems sometime!!!!
    Your classmate,
    Maria 😊

  3. Dear Girls,
    I also think that it is friendship. I really liked the picture that you drew! It really shows that you spent time doing it!

    Your friend,
    Danae

  4. Dear Ellie and Afroditi,
    I really like your poem! I think it is cool when you say, “I am a friend, I am a ship,” and this hints that it is Friendship! I also like your drawing!

    Your Funny Friend,
    Ivan

  5. Dear Ellie and Afroditi,
    I really enjoyed your poem and I liked the part that said “I float from person to person, My feelings and emotions can change on the spot.”
    It was friendship, right?

    Catarina:P

  6. Dear Ellie and Afroditi,
    I really liked your poem. Please write another one! I think it’s friendship. Am I correct?
    I liked the words you used to describe friendship. Can’t wait to read another one!
    By,
    Marialena

  7. Dear Afroditi and Ellie T.,
    I think the poem you mad was too easy because I got the answer in 3 seconds. The answer is friendship.

    From M&M

  8. Dear Afroditi and Ellie T,
    What a heartwarming poem you wrote.
    The rhymes were good, and the structure was
    powerful. When I read your poem my feelings changed
    throughout it, from wonder to happiness.
    This poem gave the description of friendship.

    P.S. The drawing was great.

    From, Mark [:

  9. Dear Afroditi and Ellie T,
    I really liked your poem and it was not that hard to guess. I liked when you said I sometimes fight, but never drown.

    -Emmanouil 🙂

  10. Dear everyone,
    As Afroditi said, I am really glad you liked our poem! We wont say the answer yet, because we want more people to guess it! Thank you for all the really nice comments!
    Ellie T

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