My Favorite color is Dark Blue.
Dark Blue, like the sky when night falls,
Dark Blue, like the ocean after rain,
Dark Blue, like the rain when it falls.
My Favorite place is Egio,
Where green grows and bugs fly.
Where village people live in peace and quiet.
When winter comes, families cuddle until summer comes again.
My Favorite food is cake.
Sweet chocolate goodness!
One bite and chocolate flows!
The smell of chocolate coming through the window,
The sight of my mother serving the sweet chocolate goodness.
My Favorite pets are cats.
Soft fluffy cats,
The small heads rise to my hand.
The sound of purring from the cat’s throat.
The majestic gold eyes sparkling at night!
My favourite colour is lilac.
When I was five years old,
I saw lilac flowers growing on a bush.
They were so beautiful.
The colour was lovely,
And the flowers felt so soft,
My favourite places are fun parks.
Because there so enjoyable, so outstanding.
I love the breeze I feel
When I’m on roller coasters,
With the wind rushing through my hair
And the delight while eating
My favourite sound
Is the sound of the breeze,
When it rustles the trees.
It makes a lovely sweet sound
That reminds me of the same rustling
While opening presents on
My favourite smell is the smell of candy.
It’s so sweet, so tasty
When it’s in my mouth.
The candy dissolves
And all the flavour and sweetness
Welcome to my new 5th grade class (2011-2012)!
Currently Write On! is hosting work from last year’s 5th grade students who chose to publish their final drafts of writing created during Writing Workshop. Take a look around, browse the stories by clicking on the Blog Archive and add a comment if you wish. Check the post below on how to add a comment.
Soon we’ll be reading your stories here, a little later in the year!
Mrs Kynigou :o)
Let us know what “works” for you in a piece of writing. Be specific in your comments. Was there a particular phrase or simile that grabbed you? Was there a surprise or something that made you laugh? Were your feelings touched or did the story remind you of an experience of your own.
Writers grow by getting positive feedback, so write a comment!
Steps to Comment:
1. Click on comment under the story you wish to comment on.
2.Write your comment in the box. Write it like a brief letter addressed to the author. Sign your comment with your first name only. Take care to check your comment for spelling, grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. Students should have a parent check it!
2.Type in the word verification.
3. Choose an identity to comment as. (If you have a gmail account, use it. If not, simply choose “Anonymous”.)
4. Click “Publish your Comment”. You may preview your comment before publishing if you’d like.
Important: You will not see your comment immediately as it will have to be approved by me first. Check back on the blog in a couple of days!
Mrs. Kynigou :o)
PS: Many thanks to educational blogger extraordinaire Ms Yollis for these tips on commenting!